Motivating myself to change!

[Charlie B]

I decided to add large vents to the sides of the mill buildings and I took Les's advice and tried to dirty things up even more. Not sure if it shows. I'm planning a KINGS PORT STEEL sign with large letters on a metal grid on top of the flat roof section. I really like the idea of adding power lines.

Any way, here's a minor update...



Ralph

Might I suggest that you increase the blue in the background buildings, It gives more illusion of depth and smoke.
Charlie